玖瑰线
仿如前世今生
大师的杰作相拥入眠
剑刃与圣杯守护着她的门宅
星空下
她可安枕无碍


我的翻译如下:
Rose Line
Death before as if life today
Embracing excellent creations of Masters to have asleep
Sword and San-greal safeguard her house
Beneath the shines of stars in the sky
Leisurely can she sleep with a soft pillow


始终觉得我的翻译不太好，希望有高人指点一下。

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玖瑰，What does this mean、