Hell , all guys!
This is the second time for me to browse this internet . Maybe you can say I'm a new member . Today , I want to ask for all guys to deliver your ideas .In this zone , you want to improve your english level , so you must to say out what you want to deliver! In my opinion , this is the only one shortcut to change your puzzledom!
Do you agree my point? If you applaud , you should keep back your valuable words!
Come on ,guys!

在您老“deliver”之前，先搞一搞基本建设吧，短短两句话，其中不该出现的基本错误就有好几处，这还不算用词不当的地方。

我只能大概明白你的意思，提醒一下，你正大踏步的走在中式英语的道路上。

Yes, I agree with you! there are more mistake in my topic.

You can point out it,I think your english is better than me.so I suggest you to reply my question in real english!

OK?

你正大踏步的走在中式英语的道路上，继续努力吧，你会说一口美国人和英国人听不懂的流利英语的。

go go