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高分作文解析 电视对孩子的影响

楼主:littlechaoer 日期: 回贴:1 浏览:

分享一篇高分作文解析,正文中蓝色标注的是值得记住的单词和词组,虽然简单但是都非常常用,一定要活学活用!(雅思高分作文并不一定要用多难的词,重点在于单词词组句型用的恰当并且逻辑内容够清楚!)


题目:

Some people say that watching TV is bad for children in all ways, but some say that it has positive effects on kids. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

 


正文:

TV programs to the young generation are what drugs to criminals(这种句型要记住:….….就像….….). Some may advocate that offspring will benefit from those mass media. While, others hold the viewpoint that it may undermine the youth growing to some extent(雅思作文第一段必有的一句话:一些人支持…..然而另一些人则持反对意见).

 


When it comes to
the short coming of TV shows, the programs with low quality and degraded tastes will definitely waste kids' valuable time, which should be spent in accomplishing their assignments after school, let alone leading to nearsighted and other physical damages(电视的缺点: 低质量的电视节目会浪费孩子的时间、会造成身体上的伤害). It’s a truth that the TV publications are so attractive and amazing that they always enable people, especially children to forget time elapsing. However, the conclusion that new media like TV will impose negative influence on kid all the ways is entirely wrong, for some TV programs, on the other side, forms a fantastic educational platform, on which kids may enjoy learning with fun(后面这几句开始转折引出下一段说电视的优点:电视节目会占用孩子大量的时间是事实,但是由此就得出电视只会对孩子有负面影响就是大错特错了,因为好的电视节目可以给孩子提供生动的教育平台).

 

On the contrary, the merits of watching TV for kids can never be neglected as mentioned above(承接上一段). TV programs such as discovering the nature and historical stories will play important roles in kindling kid's interests in sciences and arts. Compared with schooling with textbooks, TV shows are more vivid for kids who are prone to be tired of studying only from books, especially after a long period of time(自然科学类节目可以让孩子生动地学习书本知识). For another thing, it is the fashionable and stylish TV program that provides people with huge amount of information as well as relaxing entertainment. Obviously, children cannot be an exception. Due to the pressing learning stress, the young generations are definitely in need of expressive and effective methods of relieving(娱乐节目可以让孩子在学习之余放松玩乐释放压力). Nevertheless, sometimes the alleviating pressure will easily cause addiction to TV show for the children, because they lack self-discipline and always are willing to go the easier way, so that parental guidance is a must in this situation(最后一句转折进行补充:然而,因为孩子自律能力比较差,看电视容易上瘾,所以必须有家长的引导).

 

In sum, the pros and cons of watching TV depends on how people make use of it. TV programs provide a channel for children to achieve information from outside world, which is definitely beneficial as long as they are correctly led by adults. (最后一段是总结:看电视的好与坏都在与怎么利用和成年人的正确引导).

 


点评Discuss both sides是雅思作文最常见的一类,本文就是很典型的写法:第一段引出题目,第二段和第三段分别分析优缺点,第四段总结,同学们要多练习,熟悉这种写法。另外,这种作文在第二三段的分析部分要注意:不管你的观点是偏向支持还是反对,或是两边都不偏(像本文这样),你都要分析地全面,在分析优点时要兼顾缺点,分析缺点时兼顾优点(具体写法就像本文的第二和第三段的后面几句转折),因为事实如此,很多事情不是绝对的好或不好,都分析到了才能有说服力!

 

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